Lady Sydney

Well, it's been a while since I've taken a peak at your Exiles , so I will have to do some catching up, because I'm not sure I remember what's ...

I took these a few minutes ago. Sorry if the last one is blurry! >.< And, yes, I purposely centered the last three of these pictures around my favorite pirate. ...

Mkay. Thanks, Liz! :D I will work on that. ^_^

Hmm... now that I've reread this, it does seem a little dark, heavy, and Dictionary-ish. I'll try to keep that in mind when I write the other four. I was ...

Venom has a way of slithering through the veins, Corrupting soul after soul in a comforting embrace. It seeks no one race, no one gender, no one age of any ...

Thanks, Jabbs. Umm... yeah, I don't know what the deal is with my backwards punctuation. I've been trying to fix it, but everytime it IS fixed, something goes spazzy on ...

Many thanks, Aedomir! :D Hmm... I sound like a poet, huh? Cool. ^_^ I never thought of that. (Not sarcasm, mind you) I guess I can say that I'm thrilled ...

Many, many thanks for your comments! :D I guess that means there was nothing I needed to work on or improve, hm. :wink: Nah, just kidding. There's always room to ...

So sorry for making yo guys wait forever on this chapter! I've been super busy lately, which is also why I need to get back to my critiquing. And I ...

I feel that the white culture took so many other culture's ideas that they really don't have a history but just stealing others. The main thing most whites were concerned ...

This was a good revision to your first chapter. I think it sounds better this way. One thing, though. “Lives not fair!... I could have been reading the sentence wrong, ...

A girl has to go through her menstral cycle before she can get pregnant. I could be wrong (and most of the time I am), but I don't know any ...

lol! Thanks. ^_^ I'm very pleased that I violated your comfort zone. And thanks a bunch for your crit! I'm glad you enjoyed reading. =) Royally, ~ * Lady Sydney ...

On the other hand, if there are 3 girls and they want to go kill their teacher and the 3rd girl does not want to and she doesn't want to ...

My old username was Silly Sydstix, but that didn't fit my personality as much anymore, and it got a little tiring after a while because I would always spell it ...